tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18305622141301604112024-03-14T00:18:19.235-06:00Poet ShoesGerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.comBlogger826125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-33115197060277307132021-02-19T09:35:00.002-06:002021-02-19T09:37:53.851-06:00How About This Idea<p> <span style="font-size: x-large;">I read it in this morning's </span><i style="font-size: x-large;">Globe & Mail</i><span style="font-size: x-large;">, the story of POWs assigned to a minimum security camp in the boreal forest of Manitoba. No one bothers to escape, but the POWs slip away at night through the bush to town dances a few miles away. There it is--love, music, chorus of characters, subtext, humour, passions, journey, landscape. One of the POWs meets someone in town. A fraught relationship ensues. Community prejudices activate; time and world events intervene; individual passions prevail, or not. There's a stand-off, a burial, an ultimate celebration (not necessarily in that order . . .).</span></p><p><span style="font-size: x-large;">Oh yes, one of them gets the idea to order watches from the Eaton's catalogue, out of which they make the compasses they need to find their way through the bush to town.</span></p>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com3tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-5320879109392672722021-02-11T17:06:00.002-06:002021-02-19T09:23:24.860-06:00Continuing<p><span style="font-size: large;">Continuing along the lines of matters raised in the previous entries--thank you for sticking with me, aunt Taco and uncle Bean--I'm setting aside my <i>Charlotte and Wilbur</i> again.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">For one thing, I've got the forthcoming production of "Wilbur's Tale" (<a href="https://tictoctenfestival.com/">Tic Toc Ten Performance Festival</a>, streaming April, 2021), co-created with Sarah Bergbusch, to give me my <i>Charlotte's Web</i> kick. For another, I read about the production of <i>Charlotte's Web</i>, the Robinette adaptation, that Alberta Theatre Projects staged for their Christmas show, 2017. (That production featured a web made of circus rigging, over which a human Charlotte in harness climbed and crawled--Charlotte played by Manon Beaudoin, whom I would meet two years later during her turn as Golem in Globe Theatre's <i>The Hobbit.) </i>While I'm no fan of the Robinette, the fact that it was so recently done by one of the major regional theatre companies tells me it's unlikely another would be interested in even a better adaptation of CW at this time.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">So it's on to other things. I intend to re-open this blog to other than musical theatre concerns that have taken up the last hundred or so entries. </span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">These may include: the way they call hockey games on tv these days, how to succeed at being my mother's table without even trying, that time the river rose so fast we had to wait eight hours, or who might live in that third-floor room.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;"><i><br /></i></span></p>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-18097933877627916802021-01-19T10:04:00.002-06:002021-01-19T10:19:26.695-06:00Adaptation<p><span style="font-size: large;"> <span>Yesterday I read <i>Charlotte's Web </i>again and, for the first time, the adaptation by Joseph Robinette. </span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;"><span>E.B. White's novel presents the darkness and light of human experience from birth to death through the hours, days, seasons, years. Its presents ways of knowing beyond science and religion. It honours lan</span><span>guage by making Charlotte a writer and everyb</span><span>ody else a reader. It illustrates the constraints we live within and the wonders that can release us. It offers characters of mystery and depth and profound simplicity. I</span><span>t does all this with wit, with love, and with exquisitely quiet prose that utterly rehabilitates the worn-out sentiments of trust, friendship, terror, hope, and despair.</span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;"><span>I want to adapt the story not to change it, but to </span><span>present it in a new way: sung, danced, staged. My assumption, as</span><span> I've said in this blog before, is that the power of White's novel would be enhanced by the power of musical theatre. </span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">There's little magic in the Robinette adaptation. It reads like a mediocre sitcom, or mediocre MGM drama circa 1948. It attempts to accommodate as many moments from the novel as possible. In doing so, it flattens the magic.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">If I'm going to pursue my adaptation and, say, apply to an arts granting agency for funding, I would make my case along the lines sketched in this blog entry. I would say "adapt" does not mean simply "change the story." In this case, it means change the medium in which the story is presented. (Even at that, changes are made: selection of details, revising dated racial or gender references, inserting bits of my own brand of wit and wisdom (if any).) It means making the case for musical theatre which, for me, comes from this simple realization: that the deepest emotional engagement I feel while experiencing any form of art comes as a musical theatre audience member. As an artist, what I want most is to create such an experience for others.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: x-large;"><br /></span></p><p><span style="font-size: x-large;"><br /></span></p><p><br /></p>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-38760137703386000832021-01-18T10:07:00.003-06:002021-01-18T10:07:57.231-06:00Hiatus Hiatus<p> <span style="font-size: large;">Dedicated readers of this blog (good sunny morning to you, Uncle Satchell and Aunt Paige) will have deduced that my work on <i>Charlotte and Wilbur</i>, a musical adaptation of <i>Charlotte's Web</i>, has not been happening lately. (True, though an All Terrain Theatre production of "Wilbur's Tale," a different adaptation, for one actor, of the same book, is underway for the <a href="https://tictoctenfestival.com/">Tic Toc Ten</a> Short Performance festival in early April.)</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">Now it's time to either extend the hiatus, give up on the project altogether, or get back to work on it. To help me decide, I've been listening my way through a stack of musical cast recordings, an excellent podcast series called "Piece By Piece" (not the Kelly Clarkson single), and my own piano stylings via songbooks from the library. Today I'll read <i>Charlotte's Web </i>again to gauge the current status of my commitment to it. </span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">There's one other item that has been haunting my work on this project for a year: the Joseph Robinette musical called, yup, <i>Charlotte's Web. </i>This is the version that has been around for a couple of decades. I've had a copy for months but until today have refused to open it for fear of (1) copying it subconsciously and/or (2) finding it so good that how could I possibly attempt something better.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">If I'm going ahead with my own musical adaptation, I must come to terms with <i>why</i>, especially since one already exists.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">Today I'll decide.</span></p>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-10998244625597987052020-11-17T18:57:00.001-06:002020-11-17T18:57:24.676-06:00Phone Book, the Musical<p><span style="font-size: large;"> It's often said of great singers that they could sing the phone directory and make it work. If they were pros, they could.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">But why not make the directory more singable for them with, say, a story. There would be songs about numbers, about the alphabet. Voices would speak with varying purpose. The fate everyone faces is extinction. Someone, or maybe two, would emerge from the anonymity of listings and define a new form.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">Intermission.</span></p>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-61736652415011399132020-10-22T12:59:00.000-06:002020-10-22T12:59:03.370-06:00Rent<p> <span style="font-size: large;">I just watched <i>Rent: Filmed Live on Broadway</i>, a film of that show's closing night. I've been touting the pandemic appropriateness of <i>Charlotte's Web</i>. After <i>Rent</i>, set amid AIDS in NYC, I'll renew my efforts to deliver the complex solace of Charlotte's and Wilbur's story. </span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">This work has taken a new turn: a one-woman version I'm creating with Sarah Bergbusch while my <i>Charlotte and Wilbur</i> musical is in hiatus. </span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">Whatever the version, whatever the story, it must give us life exposed, threatened, affirmed--characters in the light of the stage darkness.</span></p>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-74044584609633461252020-09-28T20:35:00.001-06:002020-09-28T20:35:24.593-06:00Surrey<p><span style="font-size: large;">It is common knowledge, in the narrative of musical theatre history, that <i>Oklahoma</i> changed everything. No longer was a collection of clever songs enough. Now they had to serve the story. The story for Curly is to attract Laura. This is his pitch:</span> </p><p><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; text-decoration-line: underline;">When I take you out tonight with me</span></p><p><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Honey, here's the way it's gonna be</span></p><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">You will sit behind a team of snow white horses</span><div><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;"><br /></span></div><div><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">In the slickest gig you've ever seen</span><div><u><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /></u><span style="font-size: large;">So goes the intro bit. </span></div><div><span style="font-size: large;"><br style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /></span><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Chicks and ducks and geese better scurry</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">When I take you out in the surrey</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">When I take you out in the surrey with the fringe on top</span></div><div><u><br /></u></div><div><span style="font-size: large;">Consider the rhyme. The repetition of "surrey" works because we get the tag "with the fringe on top."</span></div><div><span style="font-size: large;"><br style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /></span><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Watch that fringe and see how it flutters</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">When I drive them high steppen strutters</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Nosy pokes will peek through their shutters and their eyes will pop!</span></div><div><u><br /></u></div><div><span style="font-size: large;">How gorgeous is that. We get the three -utters, then the tag that closes the -op rhyme.</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;"></span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">The wheels are yellow, the upholstry's brown</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">The dashboard's genuine leather</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">With eisenglass curtains you can roll right down</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">In case there's a change in the weather</span></div><div><u><br /></u></div><div><span style="font-size: large;">Oscar Hammerstein had the knack for making the rhyme seem natural, effortless, perfect for the moment of the story.</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;"></span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Two bright side lights winkin' and blinkin'</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Ain't no finer rig I'm a thinkin'</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">You can keep your rig if you're thinkin that I'd keer to swap</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Fer that shiny little surrey with the fringe on the top</span></div><div><u><br /></u></div><div><span style="font-size: large;">Winkin, blinkin, thinkin, thinkin "that I'd keer to swap."</span></div><div><span style="font-size: large;">And now we're ready, having been cued back to "pop," for the closing "top."<br style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /></span><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;"></span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Would you say the fringe was made of silk?</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Wouldn't have no other kind but silk</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Has it really got a team of snow white horses?</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">One's like snow, the other's more like milk</span></div><div><u><br /></u></div><div><span style="font-size: large;">Here we're back to the intro melody. In the most recent revival of <i>Oklahoma</i>, the potential self-consciousness that might scuttle the silk/milk rhyme is avoided by drawing out the mmmmmm-ilk. By the time it lands, we're into the rhythm of the next verse.</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;"></span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">All the world'll fly in a flurry</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">When I take you out in the surrey</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">When I take you out in the surrey with the fringe on top</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">When we hit that road hell-for-leather</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Cats and dogs will dance in the heather</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Birds and frogs will sing all together and the toads will hop!</span></div><div><u><br /></u></div><div><span style="font-size: large;">Again, a-a-a-b, c-c-c-b. The natural world falls into line.</span></div><div><span style="font-size: large;"><br style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /></span><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">The wind'll whistle as we rattle along</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">The cows'll moo in the clover</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">The river will ripple out a whispered song</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">And whisper over and over</span></div><div><u><br /></u></div><div><span style="font-size: large;">With that, permission to repeat:</span></div><div><u><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /></u><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Don't you wish you'd go on forever</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Don't you wish you'd go on forever</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Don't you wish you'd go on forever</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">And you'd never stop?</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">In that shiny little surrey with the fringe on the top</span></div><div><u><br /></u></div><div><span style="font-size: large;">Heading for lullaby now . . .</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;"></span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">I can see the stars gettin' blurry</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">When we ride back home in the surrey</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Ridin' slowly home on the surrey</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">With the fringe on top</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">I can feel the day gettin' older</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Feel a sleepy head near my shoulder</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Till it falls kerplop</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;"></span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">The sun is swimming on the rim of a hill</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">The moon is taking a header</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">And just when I'm thinking all the earth is still</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">A lark'll wake up in the meader</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;"></span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Hush, you bird. My baby's a sleepin'</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Maybe got a dream worth a keepin'</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Whoa, you team and just keep a creepin'</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">At a slow clip clop</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">Don't you hurry little surrey</span><br style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;" /><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;">With the fringe on the top</span></div></div><div><span class="lf-line js-share-line" style="cursor: pointer; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-decoration-line: underline;"><br /></span></div><div><br /></div><div><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: large;">The rhyme always gets where it needs to be.</span></div>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-86787818717520807982020-09-22T20:50:00.003-06:002020-09-22T20:50:31.257-06:00For Covid Times<p><span style="font-size: large;">In March, I was seeing <i>Charlotte's Web </i>as a fable for Covid times. That view has intensified. </span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">(Long time readers of this blog--a fine evening to you, Uncle Pete and Aunt Petite--will know what I mean by fable. Briefly, it is this: just as Wilbur and Charlotte are doomed (be slaughtered for bacon, lay eggs and die, respectively), so we must face the doom of pandemic. In this fable, we also must face the ending which if not happy is at least perfectly apt, the only way the story could end.)</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">With that in mind, I've written in a kind of prologue spoken by someone in the present, a speaker in a sanitary mask who wonders where our lives went. From that grim vibe, this speaker has to get us to the warm spring morning when Wilbur is born. </span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">Throughout the piece, the audience will recall fragments of what it was like, that time of masks and social distance. </span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">The last image remains unchanged, however. It's Wilbur on top of his manure pile, living a long life, and never forgetting Charlotte. Lights down on his contented smile.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">It may be useful solace--this story for this time.</span></p><p><br /></p>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-38588747479067295852020-09-01T19:29:00.002-06:002020-09-22T20:52:13.467-06:00Caroline, or Change<p> <span style="font-size: large;">I follow the bouncing ball of what I do. In August I built videos of a dozen poems for my book launch in October. In September I go back into my <i>Charlotte and Wilbur</i>.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">It's time to find the music. As dedicated readers of this blog know well--a warm late-summer eve to you, aunt Misty and uncle Don--collaboration on my musicals hasn't come easily. Not because I haven't wanted it, but because I've not known how to find it in ways that leave everybody satisfied, and paid for their work. </span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">I could attempt to write the music myself, as I did for <i>Oak Floors!</i>, and give it to an arranger later. Just in cause I go that route again, this morning I noodled at the keyboard and found a musical figure that sort of worked right off the top of the show, a scene in which everyone wonders, "Where's Papa going with that ax?"</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">Then I read the first act of <i>Caroline, or Change, </i>book and lyrics by Tony Kushner, music by Jeanine Tesori. Let me quote the open stage direction: "<i>Caroline, a maid, in the basement of the Gellmans' house </i>[in Lake Charles, Louisiana, 1962-63]. <i>She's doing the laundry, sorting the clothes.</i>" In the scene, Caroline, a radio, a washer, a dryer, and a young boy share the function of teaching us who and where they are, what's driving Caroline's life, and what problems she, and the boy, have to overcome.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">I haven't heard the music yet, but Spotify, here I come.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">Which is to say, music for <i>Charlotte and Wilbur</i> needs a vision I'm not sure I can provide.</span></p>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-77086199610483945262020-07-25T19:19:00.002-06:002020-07-25T19:19:23.761-06:00The Latest<span style="font-size: large;">The book of the musical (the parts not sung) is a year away from being done. The norm in musicals for decades has been that Act One is longer then Two, and more packed with songs, as is the current version of my </span><i style="font-size: x-large;">Charlotte and Wilbur, </i><span style="font-size: large;">now on hiatus</span><span style="font-size: large;">. Adjustments are required.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Just now, for the 47th time, I paused over the order of the two names in the title of my play. After the work-through with actors last month, Charlotte came first. They're her daughters at the end, she was the first to do the saving of life, and she's the one memorialized. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Still, I kept writing Wilbur first. The argument goes like this: The utter innocence of his identity as springtime pig--i.e., slaughter by Christmas--creates the eventual salvation. His need is what drives the story.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Yeah, well, it ain't that simple.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">It might come down to the matter known as "the rights." As in, who has them and must, therefore, be appeased before any adaptation of the source, in this case <i>Charlotte's Web</i>, can be licensed. <i>Wilbur and Charlotte</i>, strictly as title, suggest more distance from that source.</span>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-23069172799009179962020-07-02T16:51:00.000-06:002020-07-02T16:54:26.228-06:00Upon Re-reading Charlotte's Web<span style="font-size: large;">A culture of sleep for the humans and animals of <i>Charlotte's Web--</i>of my adaptation too, since I'm a napper--could come in handy for an organic staging of the story. The actors never leave the stage, just drift to the edges and back as needed. The center of the stage is everywhere they need to be. Numerous costume and set pieces are stored on hooks and shelves within easy reach around the perimeter, as if inside a porch, shed, or barn door. Each character becomes identified with a distinct piece--minimal, portable, expressive.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">There are no scenes as such. It's one continuous scene for Act One, another for Act Two. Here the culture of sleep ensures that someone, or everybody, often gets still and quiet. No character is immune. Though speech and action subside in these moments, the audience's reactions and expectations do not. One or more of the sleepers wakes up, and we're on to the next bit. Furthermore, the sleep habits of all characters offer various durations, from over night to a few minutes. As much time and space as a director might need, in other words. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">I've already noticed that the concept sketched above feels more fertile and free than composing the 24 scenes in the draft the actors worked through last Friday. Some of the scenes worked well, but in shaping them I left bits out that enrich the story.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">So go the notes I made on re-reading the novel yesterday and today. Another reminder I took from Friday's session is that I don't have to be a slave to E.B.White's telling of the story, beautiful as it is. Yet here I am, implying that now I can retrieve many of his details I didn't use.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">This I have to work out. Hello July!</span>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-29803410745109059602020-06-25T16:54:00.001-06:002020-06-25T16:54:29.040-06:00Work-through<span style="font-size: large;">I've hired four actors for a five-hour work-through of the book to my <i>Charlotte and Wilbur</i>, sometimes known as <i>Wilbur and Charlotte. </i>Tomorrow from noon to five, Regina time.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">General intro: who you are, how I know you, and thank you, SKarts. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">My objectives: to the hear the characters speak, to draw upon your experience as theatre professionals re script, staging, props, lighting, costumes, sound, sf/x etc.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">I'll ask questions not looking for definitive answers but possibilities.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">My vision for the show is a mainstage Christmas or late-season show, a musical. I imagine the stage I know best--the round at Globe Theatre, where all four actors have performed. </span><span style="font-size: large;">I want to create for others what I experience in a musical theatre audience. In a word, enchantment. In two, total submission.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Why an adaptation of <i>Charlotte's Web</i>? Because the moral stakes are high, it offers positive models of parenting and teaching, it shows how to find love in a time of darkness, it contains humour and play, it believes that words matter, it gives us a beautiful rendering of the great theme: time passing.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">All the characters are deeply embedded in their world, without irony (except Templeton, the rat). They're all fully who they are.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">So we'll run each scene, pause for questions, run it again. Then each act. Then the whole show, time permitting.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">And the last question will be, Should it be called <i>Wilbur and Charlotte</i> or <i>Charlotte and Wilbur</i>?</span>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-37275300615408590012020-06-04T09:48:00.002-06:002020-06-04T09:48:21.550-06:00Words and Music<span style="font-size: large;">Dedicated readers of this blog--yes, good sunny morning to you, Aunt Huck and Uncle Jim--will know I've been writing a musical called <i>Charlotte and Wilbur</i>, which I may have typed as <i>Wilbur and Charlotte</i> once or twice.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">First draft finished, it's on hiatus for the month while I write something else.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">When I say 'finished,' I mean the first draft of the book is finished, with notes for some songs and fragments of lyrics, but no complete songs.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Last night I caught an <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DFP_iQu9anM">interview</a> between Andre Previn and Stephen Sondheim from 1977. In</span><span style="font-size: large;"> their "what comes first, the music or the lyrics" chat, Sondheim says usually he hears the rhythm of the melody, then he finds the words. He cites Cole Porter writing "it was just [pause] one of those things" as that rhythm first, then later as the famous melody, <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DFP_iQu9anM">here</a> done by Rosemary Clooney.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">So, says Sondheim, I look for two things: a title line that sums up what the song is saying, and a rhythm. "From there, melodic ideas form."</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">This all makes perfect sense to me, given my limited experience with such matters. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">But, as I say, I'll be getting to all that later. The interview with Previn and the wonderfully articulate Sondheim, by the way, is one of the best I've seen.</span><br />
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<br />Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-76572408385239844262020-05-28T19:03:00.002-06:002020-05-28T19:03:34.508-06:00Song for Charlotte's Daughters<span style="font-size: large;">Here's an idea I like: the final song will be "Song for Charlotte's Daughters, in which Wilbur first discovers, then welcomes, then pleads with, then agonizes over, and finally accepts the baby spiders and what they must do every year. The memory of Charlotte sustains him. Once the work of his song is done, Wilbur can close his eyes for a snooze on top of his manure pile. I imagine a light drawing in on him, then to black.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">(In saying so, I hope I'm not stuck on the image of Porky Pig at the end of those Bugs Bunny cartoons from years ago.)</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">The most complex bit in the last scene is when this happens: </span><i><span style="font-family: "Arial",sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt; line-height: 150%; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-size: 11.0pt; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-latin;">One by one, they climb to the top of the fence,
stand on their head, point their spinneret in the air and let loose a cloud of
fine silk. The silk forms a balloon. Each spider lets go of the fence and rises
into the air. The general effect is one of bursting, incl explosion of light
and music. The air fills with tiny balloons, each carrying away a spider.</span></i><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">A note to myself says, Let the designer figure it out! Which keys right in to what I hope for this play: that a group of professionals will build and perform it. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Maybe the most complex bit in the last scene is that time passes first a season at a time, then in a rush over the rest of Wilbur's days. Will be tricky to pace. It is the denouement of the piece, so things speed up toward their conclusion, but must stretch out a little, too.</span>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-85656957805565379062020-05-24T19:06:00.000-06:002020-05-24T19:06:36.447-06:00Sacrifice<span style="font-size: large;">Dedicated readers of this blog--good Sunny Sunday evening to you, Uncle Chilli and Aunt Pep--will know of my admiration for the moral stakes put before us by <i>Charlotte's Web</i>. What Charlotte and Wilbur do for each other puts them in the top one percent on the holiness scale.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">But wait a minute. Charlotte does go to a lot of trouble for Wilbur, knowing that if she doesn't, Wilbur will be slaughtered by Christmas. And Wilbur, in turn, saves her children by taking them home, while she lives out her last days and dies, alone. But that egg sac he takes so carefully home, and attends to so lovingly as time goes on, would have done just fine where Charlotte left it--attached safely to an out-of-the-way corner at the Fairgrounds. The spiders could hatch there as safely as in the doorway above Wilbur's pen at the farm.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Are the stakes, then, not quite so exalted as I claimed? Maybe Wilbur's not so noble, just lucky. But then I realize it's not the <i>fact</i> that matters--the fact that he didn't actually save her children--it's what it <i>means</i> that matters. He's maxed out his nobility, in other words, as Charlotte has. In his mind, he's saving her children, which is why when 511 out of 514 of them literally drift away when hatched, he's a little disappointed. But three stay. And some of their children will stay too, and Wilbur will live a long life in the company of Charlotte's daughters, and he'll be sure to tell them all about her.</span>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-33219010182483033092020-05-20T16:39:00.005-06:002020-05-20T16:39:49.388-06:00Work Continues<span style="font-size: large;">This afternoon in the park, looking at scene 11, dubbed "The Trick," of my <i>Wilbur and Charlotte</i> (or is it <i>Charlotte and Wilbur</i> Not yet sure), Charlotte's revision of her web to say "Some Pig" appears. It's diving revelation, of a kind. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Pretty much the entire scene, I was thinking in the park, would be sung in a song called "Upon First Looking Into Charlotte's (Revised) Web" in which everyone responds to what the morning light has revealed. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Forgetting for a moment the details that the novel delivers at this point in the story, I imagined my own family, gathering for a reunion. </span><span style="font-size: large;">There's combing of hair, washing of cars, trying-on of a new hat. </span><span style="font-size: large;">Somebody brings a pie, a thermos of tea. A ball and a couple of gloves. Somebody pulls out a cribbage board. A Mountie shows up and salutes! etc.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">The point is, what Charlotte has written jolts this community. It's language used as they've never seen it. And the first thing every new passer-by, every rubber-necker, has to do is <i>read</i>.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">This would be an ensemble piece, obviously. I imagine a wagon pulled on, loaded with costume/prop bits the performers can zip on and off as they work through the company of characters responding to what is written. (The Mayor in a ceremonial sash, a line of schoolkids holding hands, the editor of the local newspaper, the county cop, etc.)</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">And if that's not enough to get a song lyric composed, I can draw from my own response, these last few months. to <i>Charlotte's Web</i> itself.</span>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-39902015173361477402020-05-06T18:26:00.000-06:002020-05-06T18:29:42.754-06:00One of those Small Breakthroughs<span style="font-size: large;">I'd been wondering how to deliver how much Fern loves Wilbur. The bottle feedings four or five times daily. The way he falls asleep in her baby carriage. His long lashes, and the rest of it. This we have to know so that what happens later in the story hits us hard. The stakes are high for the characters in this story. That's what every scene must build.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Anyway, this is what I came up with: One day at school Miss B. assigns an essay. Tell what you love about someone you love. Fern's </span><span style="font-size: large;">classmates disappear into darkness. She sits alone at her desk with her pencil and scribbler and begins, "What I Love About Wilbur," by Fern Arable. Her essay, printed in a sure but early hand, will say, in the end, <i>Every day is a happy day, and every night is peaceful.</i></span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">This monologue--will it be sung?--will bump up against the big old world of pork production, in which Wilbur's got to be sold. He's eating scraps, not just warm milk, and I'm not (says Mr. Arable) willing to provide for him any longer. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Fern is in anguish but, in one of the story's wise-parent moments, she and her father arrive at the solution: she'll sell the pig to her Uncle Homer for $6.00. She can go down the road to visit Wilbur any time she wants. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">And Wilbur finds his home in Zuckerman's barn.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">You know how the rest of it goes. The fact that Wilbur is a pig means the butcher is never far off. He avoids his pig destiny only through the writerly intervention by his dear friend Charlotte. </span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">But not to get ahead of myself. For now, maybe, Fern's monologue/essay shows us the devotion we must feel with her, which, in turn, enriches what she and her father achieve in the Zuckerman deal.</span>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-67869166534024211342020-05-01T20:32:00.000-06:002020-05-01T20:32:06.249-06:00As I Was Saying<span style="font-size: large;">(I think that's the title of my next memoir fragment . . .)</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">I was talking about that guy who comes out in the blue patterned sports jacket and slacks, shirt and tie, looks across the stage at the tableaus of three or four fairy tales, and says, Once upon a time . . . </span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">This cues the famous 16th-note lead-in, more of a kick-off, to an orchestral vamp that underscores the stories we're about to experience.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">Since we last met, dear reader, I did begin to lean on imagining how my <i>Charlotte's Web</i> adaptation might begin. Before, I had Mr. Arable with the ax cross once and disappear. The various characters take turns stepping into the light just long enough to give us a taste of what they're about, ending with "Where's Papa going with that ax?" Now, Mr. A strides intently across the stage at every transition from one mini-preview to the next. And our narrator plays most of the speakers--the cow, the sheep, various humans, the rat--donning a prop or costume piece appropriate for each speaker. These would hang on a series of hooks as if just inside the barn door, or back porch. (While I'm at it here, what if one actor played all the voices AND Mr. Arable with the ax. That would leave Charlotte, Wilbur and Templeton. A cast of four. (Absolute minimum.))</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">And so on. I'm pretty sure my work on this show in the next little while will be about, somehow, if and how this narrator figure could work.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Yeah, four is too few. The three main characters and an ensemble--each person playing multiple voices--of five, for eight altogether. We'll see. </span>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-85282649219555728982020-04-24T18:43:00.000-06:002020-05-01T20:34:14.851-06:00Back to Sondheim<span style="font-size: large;">Dedicated readers of this blog--and a spring good evening to you, Aunt Hail and Uncle Rain--will know of my admiration for the composer/lyricist Stephen Sondheim. I go back to his work all the time--the filmed stage versions of his plays (well, two of them: <i>Sunday in the Park with George</i> and <i>Into the Woods</i>) and his splendid two volumes of annotated lyrics called <i>Finishing the Hat</i> and <i>Look, I Made a Hat</i>. (I keep going back to everything I like--The Crown, for instance, or Brooklyn, or the core 25 books on my shelf. And Sondheim.) I go back because there's always more to see and learn.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">There's always something different I need from them, something new I'm ready for. In the case of <i>Into the Woods</i>, I'm thinking about Act One. It's a mash-up of fairy tales including Rapunzel, Cinderella, Jack and the Beanstalk and others. Though the pace is occasionally frenetic and the poly-vocal structure complex, the piece stays true to the elemental simplicity of the tales: happy ever after. But that's only Act One.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Anyway, there's a narrator who pops on- and off-stage. I'm back to my Charlotte's Web, wondering if I could use a narrator to simulate that function that appears in E.B.White's prose. In Sondheim's play, the narrator pops out stage left or right, dressed like a contemporary older man, casual business style. Everyone else is in their fairytale costume. How, I wonder, might this work in my Charlotte's Web.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">The other note I've made is about the cow. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Charlotte's Web, of course, is full of animals. The one certainty I have about my adaptation is that the animals CANNOT be mascots. That is, they must be able to move like real animals, live the lifestyle of real animals, submit to the destiny of real animals. But they're played by human actors. So what do they wear, what do they look like? I know I will find a designer to answer these questions, but for now, <i>Into the Woods</i> presents a useful notion via the </span><span style="font-size: large;">cow.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">The cow, about the size of a real calf, is a rigid creature, milky white in colour. Little attempt at naturalism with this design. When the cow must move, it is pushed forward or backward on its teflon-coated (I'm assuming) feet. If the movement must be quicker, the actor can simply grab the suitcase-like handle fixed to the creature's spine and carry it away. This gets a laugh from the audience. But not enough to take them out of the story. That business-casual narrator is like that too. It's a bit of a cheesy choice, but it's not overdone and it works.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">A lot of things can be done. A lot of things work, though the abyss is ever at hand. The thrill, the challenge, is to risk and find solutions.</span>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-90352646945316530142020-04-10T16:38:00.001-06:002020-04-10T16:38:06.311-06:00Getting Near the End<span style="font-size: large;">Well, here's a puzzle. At the Fair, in a long-ish scene Wilbur is awarded a medal for being so radiant. For his people, it's the greatest moment of their lives. Wilbur himself is proud and happy. This takes place in the judges' booth in front of the grandstand.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Charlotte, meanwhile, is back in Wilbur's pen, being too weak to move. She's created her egg sac and will soon die. But she can hear what's going on at the medal ceremony over the Fair Ground loudspeaker.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">When things calm down, Wilbur and Charlotte are alone in the pen. Wilbur is beside himself with agony at the thought of Charlotte not returning to the Zuckerman barn with him. She tells him to settle down. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">With the people soon returning to pack up for him, Wilbur has to act quickly. He gets Templeton, the rat, to climb up and snip the egg sac from its mooring on the ceiling and bring it to Wilbur. Wilbur will carry the sac home in his mouth, having already learned from Charlotte that the sac is waterproof and strong.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Mouth firmly closed, all he can do to say good-bye as he's loaded onto the truck is wink to Charlotte. All she can do is whisper a weak good-bye. Soon the Fair Ground will is deserted. Charlotte dies alone.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">The puzzle is how to stage it. If we see Charlotte and only hear the loudspeaker, we don't see much action. If we see the scene in the judges' booth--which is full of important plot elements involving mostly the human characters--how do we sense Charlotte's fading vigil over her last hours. Could we see both at the same time somehow? Maybe it's two scenes--in the novel, White gives them a chapter each. I imagine, however, that the action at the grandstand and silence and stillness of Charlotte will make for a powerful juxtaposition. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Of course, the matter of designing the egg sac, and showing Templeton climb up to get it, and showing Wilbur put it into his mouth--well, the theatre pros will take care of all that. Somehow.</span>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-17027238313012797052020-03-26T16:58:00.000-06:002020-03-26T16:58:07.877-06:00Being Wilbur<span style="font-size: large;">First and foremost, he's a real pig. Who can talk. </span><span style="font-size: large;">He prefers sleeping to all else except eating. He craves and creates love.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">The danger would be in making him sound like me or some character or anyone other than himself. </span><span style="font-size: large;">So to understand Wilbur I'd have to study pigs, as E.B.White had done. I'd have to watch them, smell them, listen to grunts, feed them. </span><span style="font-size: large;">And let Wilbur's voice go from there.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">As for Charlotte . . .</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">[photo of page on which Charlotte, chairing a meeting of barn animals, mutters and glares.]</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">That's as cranky as she ever gets. Her purpose in calling the meeting is to generate new ideas for her web and thus save Wilbur's life. The sage counsel of the oldest sheep is to appeal to the rat, Templeton, who can bring back bits of text from the dump. She convinces him to do so by appealing to his "baser instincts."</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;"><br /></span>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-88119929028381898332020-03-19T16:33:00.000-06:002020-03-26T16:59:21.418-06:00Both Wilbur and Charlotte<span style="font-size: large;">A while back I got an idea that continues to land as fabulous-plus: have a woman I know play Wilbur, and man I know play Charlotte. Both are veteran actors. They're married to each other. He's taller, more angular, more like a spider negotiating a web or descending on a thin, spun line. She's stronger, more compact, better at rooting and rolling and snuffling at scraps. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">These two would understand/create perfectly Charlotte's love for Wilbur, and his for her.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">When I pitched the idea--more a casual lob than a pitch--she said, "Did you mean to cross the genders?" </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">"Absolutely," I said. "Charlotte and Wilbur are beyond gender." Which I leave at that.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">In making the pitch, I sent an alphabetized list of what both Wilbur and Charlotte <i>do</i>. Here are the first five items:</span><br />
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<b><span style="mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Wilbur</span></b></div>
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Act quickly when it matters most</div>
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Adore a little girl who believes in you</div>
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Aim to please</div>
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Be center of attention</div>
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Be grateful</div>
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<b>Charlotte</b></div>
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Accept what is sure to come, but reach for more</div>
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Admit you’ll never get home again.</div>
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Be generous without limits, but impatient when
necessary</div>
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Be invisible at times</div>
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Be matter-of-fact about who you are and what
you do</div>
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<b>Both Wilbur and Charlotte</b></div>
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Ask and answer questions</div>
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Be alone together</div>
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Be open to new words</div>
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Comfort</div>
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Discuss stillness</div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">In my imagination, the two actors and I would build the show from </span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">the </span><span style="font-size: large;">story come from that.</span></div>
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Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-59487794697444050402020-03-16T21:21:00.000-06:002020-03-17T01:24:35.084-06:00As I Sit Here in the Ugly Red Light of Rainbow Cinema 8 for Sorry We Missed You<span style="font-size: large;">I'm thinking of <i>Charlotte's Web</i> (Gerry's version) as fable for a troubled time. No need to allude much to Covid-19. The story already has that sense that current conditions, though lethal, will not last, or, that they mark one of those transitions we're heir to as citizens of this planet, this universe. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">I mean lethal: significant death, much of it harshly experienced.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">It must be so, if the corresponding explosion of joy or realization is to reach us. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Taking precautions, or not, vis-a-vis Covid-19 is not unlike the world of CW. There is threat, uncertainty and volatility in the novel and, as I sit here in the ugly red light, in today's world.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">If so, Templeton, the amoral rat, likely gets a new title: Bearer of Disease. (He would say, bring it on.)</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">The intent of this version of CW might be for everyone viewing it to re-think our contemporary world.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">And, as noted, it wouldn't take much to tip the audience that way. A line for Wilbur, one for the rat, a word from Charlotte or fragment of gossip at the Zuckermans' supper table might be enough.</span>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-77812303327084209032020-03-02T18:30:00.000-06:002020-03-02T18:38:34.479-06:00Daily Schedules<span style="font-size: large;">Ben Franklin:</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">5:00 Rise, wash and address Powerful Goodness.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">8:00 Work.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">12:00 Read or overlook my accounts, and dine.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">2:00 Work.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">6:00 Put things in their places, supper, examination of the day.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">10:00 Sleep.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">Jay Gatsby:</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">6:00 Rise from bed.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">6:15 Dumbbell exercise and wall scaling.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">7:15 Study electricity, etc.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">8:30 Work.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">4:30 Basketball and sports.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">5:00 Practice elocution, poise and how to attain it.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">7:00 Study needed inventions.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">Wilbur:</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">6:30 Breakfast. Skim milk, crusts, middlings, etc.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">7:00 Breakfast finished.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">7:00 Have a talk with Templeton, the rat. Not that interesting, but better than nothing.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">8:00 Take a nap outdoors.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">9:00 Dig a hole or trench and possibly find something good to eat buried in the dirt.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">11:00 Stand still and watch flies, bees and swallows.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">12:00 Lunchtime. Warm water, apple parings, meat gravy.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">1:00 Sleep.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">2:00 Scratch itchy places by rubbing against the fence.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">3:00 Stand perfectly still.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">4:00 Supper. Skim milk, provender, prune skins, etc.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;"><br /></span>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1830562214130160411.post-90529834579242704492020-02-28T16:30:00.003-06:002020-02-29T09:08:35.305-06:00Wilbur and Charlotte: Song for Chapter Three<span style="font-size: large;">[outline of content for first verse]</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Lonely and bored, Wilbur's got no place to go. "That's where you're wrong my friend," says a goose. Wilbur squeezes past a</span><span style="font-size: large;"> loose board in the fence.</span><span style="font-size: large;"> With nothing between himself and the big world, now what? The goose replies with 14 different verbs and a main idea:</span><span style="font-size: large;"> </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;"> The world is a wonderful place when you're young.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">[second]</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Wilbur has about ten minutes of free-time. Mrs. Z spots him from the kitchen window. She calls the men. The geese hear the racket. Pretty soon all animals know Wilbur's out and cheer him on. If this is what it's like to be free, Wilbur would rather be penned up.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;"> The world is a wonderful place when you're young. </span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;"> [action-packed chorus]</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">A cocker spaniel sneaks up from one way, hired man from the other, ready to head Wilbur off if he broke for the garden. The goose shouts orders, the dog springs for his hind leg. Screams, scrambles, dodges, grabs, cheers.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">[third]</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">It is too much. After all, Wilbur is only a very young pig. He wishes Fern were there to comfort him. </span><span style="font-size: large;">When Mr. Z approaches with a pail of warm slops, Wilbur feels relieved. He steps back through the fence. They nail it shut. "He's quite a pig," they say.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;"> T</span><span style="font-size: large;">he world is a wonderful place when you're young.</span>Gerald Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05252429320186782729noreply@blogger.com0